|Reviews for Sea Foam|
| Wopaloplopyop chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Awesome poem! My favourite part was the fifth last stanza, and your descriptions.
| like a lover chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
love. it. so. much. I love the imagery. I love the colours that pop into my head when I read this. And I am so in love with the beach. Especially in the winter time. but I do think this could've worked better as a short prose or somethin, since it was so descriptive. the words were lovely, it's just the... format that seems off to me a lil bit.
| Electra Fairford chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
*claps slowly* amazing...
If you want constructive criticism, check the rhythm...just punctuate a few lines so that they flow more easily. Also the "/I thought I could hear you calling" stanza is a little too repetitive; perhaps change the verb.
Otherwise I have no suggestions; I am deeply impressed by this poem and thank you for posting it.