Reviews for Drown
Reyavie chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Hey there! I just read this poem...and I really liked it. I can't tell how many times I felt this and you transmited it perfectly. Well done. Keep writing ;)

Reyavie
Devidedistand chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
I like it. But I think the third line should say, "Your feigned care stings far worse than this needle ever should" instead of "Your faked care stings far worse than this needle ever should."