Reviews for His Greatest Mistake
Black Pen chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
wow. powerful. love it!
Les Yeux Minuit chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
this i think is one of my favorite poems ever...it was so beautiful and well formed...i loved it words can't describe how awesome this was
account not in use chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
fantastiic, the emotions ring true
The-Original-Neko chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
wow liked it but i wonted more but is'nt that just what i always feel when reading poems
Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
There's an uneasy feeling over this; is it joy or sorrow, joy IN sorrow or sorrow IN joy or... the list goes on and on. This is just the kind of thing that kills people; by breaking their hearts.
rocket baby doll chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
i absolutly adore this piece, i havn't exactly been rvwing much lately, nothing seemed good... but the emotion, and just general awesomeness of this piece just made me happy. keep it up!
AmethystPisces chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Oh this is so beautifuland yet so tragic. I love the emotions this piece invokes. I could literally feel my heart break as I was reading this. Very nice job.