Reviews for The Other Woman
poetic abortion chapter 2 . 9/27/2005
it all is perfect. every line flawless.

~* noelle
account not in use chapter 2 . 9/27/2005
so painful.
account not in use chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
holy fuck. that is so true to how it is. so true to everything. lovely work.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
love the impassive tone that is carried through out this. I love the ending, how simply stated and blunt it is. the whole thing is so down-to-earth and real. I enjoyed it immensly.

~* noelle
cOnfuzed-pOet chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Oh.. kind of sounds to me like a revenge thing... kind of.. Im not sure.. this makes me think and I like that! Nice job... hope you get a good grade! ) lol..

Please R&R some of mine! )cOnfuzed-pOet
Prevaricate chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
This is very, very good. The tone ispassive, contradicting the tragic description of the wife's world falling apart, giving "the other woman" a personality without ever actually addressing her character.

Very nice.

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