I was waiting the entire time for the "supernatural" surprise. It was a cute ending. I liked it a lot.

Well that's sad... And cute. It's kinda like a happy-ending but nor really... Nice ending anyway : I didn't see it coming :-)

Overall I like this story but it's also kinda sad. Kudos on the shocker at the end. Totally didn't see that coming.

It was really sweet and supernatural in its own way :) thank God they could be free from there I like they can now go to California.

wow wow wow wow wow.

my mind is gonna be stuck on this for the next week.

Maybe I was being oblivious, but I was NOT expecting that. Seriously good story though. Explains why the security guard didn't see them... Ohhh :) Well, nice writing!

I came across this story on a whimsy, and Supernatural turned out to be a lot more awesome than I expected it to be. Please don't take that the wrong way, I totally mean that as a compliment. I enjoyed it immensely. Great job!

Thissss... Makes me want to cry. But laugh at the same time. Love it so much.

gveabic jesus my heart totally skipped when he was like 'holy shit i am dead'

Awe, sweet story. At first I was really sad that he was dead but it got better in the end _ They seem like the kind of couple that you could read about for hours. Kudos.

This was really good. I love the characters as well as just how the story flowed. It was sad in a sweet way but it was still very good. Thanks for the great read. Keep writing.

Would have never guessed. :)) I should paid more attention to the title, "Supernatural", hahaha...

You win cause I so wasn't expecting that. At all.

WOWOOWW!

that was so cool!

i loved that last part haha

That was insane! I LOVE this stuff!

I like how you wrote it so that there's something wrong with Quentin even before we know something's wrong... like no one's that angry for long.

He has layers and he's like a kid in that all he wants is a hug and he feels ages and ages better.

Max is just a bowl of hilarity.

*rereads*