Huh. Who woulda think that Leo and Richard would be friends. Then again, the cliques that they seem to belong to don't always have anything to do with them.

One thing: "a nose thatlooked toNickolas to have belonged to a pig." that looked and to Nickolas need a space between them.

I liked the bits about the schedule. The line that I really liked was ...he wasn't thinking straight, or more accurately, he wasn't thinking at all.

You spelled schedule wrong...typo, I assume. Might wanna fix it.

Strange; did this story get deleted? Or did you edit it? It's been a while since I've read this, so I can't tell. Anyway, it's very nice. But I'm sure you already knew that! ;-)