Reviews for Lord, Let Me
The Postscript chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Amen...it's funny that these words were exactly what I was thinking last night as I fragments of stressing memories were spinning in my mind. I was listening to the radio, and the speaker said, 'the greatest trust a child can give an adult is falling asleep in the adult's arms.' But that is also true for, not just adults and parents, but God. I pray before we all fall asleep we embrace God and lay to rest in His arms. Keep writing. God bless, Katja.
Aleithea chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
It's beautiful. It's more of a prayer than a poem. You're feelings are deep and well expressed. I like the form too. Keep up the fabulous work!Aleithea
ronshaberry chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Good job! Amen! I admire and agree with you, as was expressed with "Amen." *cough* I think that not many people really realize the importance of completely depending on good, and don't really accept it. I know I struggle. _x