Reviews for Ashomle
Shadow Gryphon chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
That was very, very neat. I liked the flow of the poem, the pace of the story... It all just fit together. Kudos!
Todd chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Then how does Ashomle feel about Winter's brief affair with Spring, I wonder? The transition is so abrupt and vast, as opposed to the gentler differences betwixt Spring and Summer, Summer and Autumn, then Autumn and Winter.

Well, I've never read symbolistic writing about the seasons that I've liked as much as this. I thought it was beautiful
K.A. Douglass chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
I like how you personified the seasons. I wonder, though, is there a spring? Or does winter just fade right into summer?

I'm just a bit confused, because I thought there were 30 months in ATiU. Are Ashomle, Llial'oh and AflÄen just key months within the calendar year as a whole? If so, are they the first month of their representative seasons, or the ones most obviously pertaining to their seasons? Just wanted a bit of clarification there.