Reviews for FiNiSHeD
Annaece chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
Wow, another great piece! I probably wouldn't be who 'they' want me to be - just be the opposite and ignore them, but that's just be,lol.
xXxKxXx chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
so sad...

good job
Musingsofasomebody chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
*claps* this is sucha good poem! :)
revertedautumn chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
kinda kinky. lol. jk. Don't you hate it when you just can't say no? I love your meters...
writerforever chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
This is a good poem, sad but good. I totally understand this feeling. I went through something similar to this where I didn't care. But I found something to give me a reason to be who I am on the inside. Hope things get better for ya. Keep up the good work! :)
Moonlight Tigress chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
wow... this is really deep, and so sad... and i can feel the raw emotions in this...

i guess in some ways i understand it, and i feel that way myself sometimes.

if i understood it completely, id be you.

so, nice piece of work, sad, but meaningful. well done.
Quaint Feathers Unavailable chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Good poem. Very dark. I know that life can sometimes be hard, to the point that you just want it to end, but just don't give up. There is always some reason to keep going. Anyways good poem. Keep up the good work.
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
I like it but what is up with the WiErD teXT?
Aquafied chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
we're finished and .

I'd rather smile then scream-love
SassyLil'Thunderstorm chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
I like this...reminds me of one of my poems on here...Sometimes it feels like you just win for nothing...and you just have to say screw it and screw them and make yourself happy...good job...i dont know if this is your best or not but i'll try to check out some more of your stuff in the near future...
KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
some serious angst, great job writing this. the last line ties up like an angsty Christmas present. this is one of my favorties.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
hows bout this; wehn my pc wants to run at speed faster than 1mph ill review more? that literally took 3 mins to open review screen.. i so dont have patience for it, lol. anyways, nice poem, and do keep it up! i will be back to review soon; so sorry i dont. i took a long *break* from the site to make my own web site, lol. no, thats not the reason but hey, lol. anyways, take care and ill *try* to make my pc like me enough to go faster :P
Icthoid Matro Coselos chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
interesting feelings... well expressed. some things are told well in your words... this is one. good job, thanks for sharing.
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Aw...this is sad, i no how u feel coz i have felt like this be4, but keep fighitng and remember that there is always a light at the end of the tunnel_ If someone is doing this to you tell them...then hurt them...if u dont...can i? Nice poem tho...u r very meaningful_
Neaera chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
It would be 'out-of-character' of my personality to say I've felt this way too. But that's the sad part... I have... and it totally sucks. If it feels like this person is using you, fight back, don't ever give up. Rules are meant to be broken, and if not broken, modified. Now, on with the poem review? lol K, now this does, I think, confirm my theory of delving into pros?'don't want to fight anymore

Just throw me away

Shove me to the floor

I don't have the energy to simply say no...

I hate being your plaything

But there's no other way to go'

I found a pattern! You had a pattern of ryhming the word with the line below the line. If that makes sense... lol well it does to me. But this pattern doesn't continue throughout the entire poem, so yes, I think it does confirm my theory... and I'm absolutely loving it. Like I said, in pros you can write anything without having to worry... and yet, somehow, you keep up the ryhthm... how do you do it? lol. Wicked and keep it up! *Loves n hugs!* :o)
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