Reviews for Guilty
NotJustAnotherVillain19 chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
I think this is my most favorite poem of yours, I love your details and how it ends! I especially love the line, "Vodka mixed with bubblegum" awesome!
Rubyme chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
M, wonderful.
Haberdasher chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
this was very vivid. beautiful imagery in a different sort of way because it doesnt seem like it should be beautiful...if that makes sense, a very visual poem. 'i awake:guilty. ' great line. keep it up- the Lady Elaine