Reviews for hesheitour volcanic
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
incredible.
notACTUALLYwriting chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
weird and detached in an artistic way. nice.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
Abstract and rich.
hey maria chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
...Wow.

Love the use of parentheses to add more to a word. I don't actually get the meaning...but it's beautiful nonetheless. The last line is so final and powerful.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
tasting like aluminum

i dont know, it's good, but i feel blank after reading it, really love the first stanza and the and symbols, nicely done
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
cool.. I like it a lot
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
wow loved the formatting the meaning was profound, i must say i'm impressed

keep writing!
by His blood chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
(this is eyes of lithium.) this. was. fucking. brilliant. i almost cried, this affected me so deeply. it makes me want to scream & cry & laugh all at once. excellent job, as always. i loved this.
Haberdasher chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
good stuff, very jagged and emotional. m, i love the abstract...- the Lady Elaine
crackpot chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
I think it'd work even sans formatting.
this is murder chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
that's so cool, the format, and the poem itself is really beautiful. i love it.
zakei chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
WOAH. thats INTERESTING. i dont get the splitting and the bracketing and the dotting, but it looks like a very cool picture. hahas. i dont particularly get the meaning of the poem. :
Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
W.O.W

your formatting only makes it all the more totally&utterly gem from you-your works never disapoint .
lackluster chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
something about this is electrifying.

'hush(littlebaby)don'tsayaword'.wow, breathtaking line.

you add so much depth to this, it's eternal,almost.
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
"hush(littlebaby)don'tsayaword" I can hear that being sung. Beautiful job. And I love the stuttering in "(j-j-just like ink&betrayal)" Another wonderful poem.
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