|Reviews for hesheitour volcanic|
| punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
| notACTUALLYwriting chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
weird and detached in an artistic way. nice.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
Abstract and rich.
| hey maria chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
Love the use of parentheses to add more to a word. I don't actually get the meaning...but it's beautiful nonetheless. The last line is so final and powerful.
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
tasting like aluminum
i dont know, it's good, but i feel blank after reading it, really love the first stanza and the and symbols, nicely done
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
cool.. I like it a lot
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
wow loved the formatting the meaning was profound, i must say i'm impressed
| by His blood chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
(this is eyes of lithium.) this. was. fucking. brilliant. i almost cried, this affected me so deeply. it makes me want to scream & cry & laugh all at once. excellent job, as always. i loved this.
| Haberdasher chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
good stuff, very jagged and emotional. m, i love the abstract...- the Lady Elaine
| crackpot chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
I think it'd work even sans formatting.
| this is murder chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
that's so cool, the format, and the poem itself is really beautiful. i love it.
| zakei chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
WOAH. thats INTERESTING. i dont get the splitting and the bracketing and the dotting, but it looks like a very cool picture. hahas. i dont particularly get the meaning of the poem. :
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
your formatting only makes it all the more totally&utterly gem from you-your works never disapoint .
| lackluster chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
something about this is electrifying.
'hush(littlebaby)don'tsayaword'.wow, breathtaking line.
you add so much depth to this, it's eternal,almost.
| GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
"hush(littlebaby)don'tsayaword" I can hear that being sung. Beautiful job. And I love the stuttering in "(j-j-just like ink&betrayal)" Another wonderful poem.