aww, at first i was like 'i don't know if i can take another teen angst poem' and then i hit the end and i was like 'aww', so yeah _; for being a writer i'm not very good at paraphrasing well, so bear with me *nods*

anyhoo, great poem. as i kind of said before, i like how it turns around at the end. it's very gratifying to hear someone say 'i love you' and it -can- begin to pull someone out of the hole they've either been thrown in or dug themself into. i like the way you split up your lines as well. it seemed to make the poem flow nicely. all in all, fantastical job! . keep it up!

~Winter~

That's depressing and upbeat at the same time. Like it.

-o-o-Hazellin-o-o-

Hm, this is sort of what it's like to be really depressed and then suddenly realize what you're depressed about is not such a big deal, that really the world hasn't crumbled completely yet. I dunno, I think I'm reading too deep, but I really like this, it's basic and again-to the point.