|Reviews for Subject 136|
| Lord Darling chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
One of the horror offerings at this place that truly DOES disturb the reader. The blasé tone of the narrator is truly horrifying. Well done, loved it.
| Jesse Pelletier chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
I literally felt like gagging!
Hey, Sorry, but this narrator reminds me of all those Nazi Scientist performing brutal experiments of the undesirables. Inconsiderate care of life.
I don't think the body would rot that fast, but overall it was a very good story :)
| Trazia chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
HOLY CRAP! this is really good it actually sounds like some one is looking at a man in an experiment documenting everything they saw. i feel sorry for the guy in the water, hey could u answer one question, how come they where experimenting on the guy any way cause it does say that the experiment isn't being done for the guys psychological sate, have i understood it right i hope i have...
But yeah i loved this story and it is scary that this could actually be going on some where out there in a labratory
| dead already chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Oh, ew. Very nasty. The detached POV was very effective; and the line about whether he was screaming or laughing was pretty creepy.
| Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
For a short little one-shot this was pretty good. The only thing is that if he had on a breathing mask then how could he ingest anything in the tank? Pretty creepy, but you also never stated what the hypothesis was. I think this could have a couple of improvements and become an 5-star piece. Very good work. ~Cirien Phoenix
| Neo Candlefrost chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
Whoa...! That was a great twist at the end, and your depiction of the cold-hearted researchers was excellent. Keep up the good work!
| miramee chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
That is so sick (in a good way).
I must say, I don't quite comprehend how he could die through simply being immersed in water (or did he starve to death) nor the rotting away of the flesh so soon.
But otherwise - extremely creepy.
| NSMounts chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Excellent story! One of the best I have read on Fiction Press.
| WormsofCharacter chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Wow. You achieved the goal of horror pieces. I am officially creeped out and slightly disgusted with humanity.
| AmbroseMaximilien chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Chilling and creepy o.o