|Reviews for A Scar|
| Benjamin Cheah chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Excellent story, especially for fictionpress. However, I reckon you can tone the rating down to 'T'. It's certainly not explicitly violent, so it does not warrant the 'M' rating.
By the way...just my opinion, 'gun' can mean literally thousands of firearms in existence, so I use more specific words. 'Pistol', 'rifle', that sort of thing.
Of course, for this story, I doubt that you'll need that kind of precision.