|Reviews for Time|
| classic violet chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Very true. Our lives *are*, to me, based on time.
P.S: Thank you for your review! :D
| grip chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
It seemed on this part, the comma after say is misplaced:All we seem to say,Is when? And where?
and you could use commas on this part:8:00 time for school
the meaning is good. i can't quite tell if you're saying it's good or bad that life is ruled by time. so is it ruled by food, sleep, money, and passions. It's a part of life, not an enslavement