Reviews for My child
Ryukoji chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
aww.. sweet.
Patricia Louise chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
Great poem!
ThatRandomCatGirl chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
Aw...sweet, sad, etc. Very nicely done. Reminds me of some kind of nursery rhyme...rime? which spelling.? nevermind.

ADSpencer chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
What a sweet lullaby...Beautiful.
rocket baby doll chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
this really makes me want a hug...and yeah, fiction press has been screwing with the spacing on some of my pieces too, i just switched methods (like html instead of like a text file..) that seemed to work.
dooley creel chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
good, touching, I like the encouragement spoken to the child, to sooth, to Press has a very stingy format, entries get forced into some predetermined mold, though poetry is not too bad, the essay/ short story format gets really mashed. dc