Reviews for Somewhere
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
I’m sick of misbelieve and dejection... misbelief

Its never as good as the's

Its the metaphor of our's

::Sigh:: so true
queenvixta chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
I definetly prefer the end to the start, all the lines beginning with 'somewhere' are beautiful. Great piece! I promise to read your new story later! QueenVixta
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
Heck what a graeat poem...u start off by attacking ur stae (which is so correct from where i aam...) artificial food, TV dinners, i t all makes sense..but then you go into your feelings and realitism of how somewhere somehting is happeneing to someone...very good_ Luved it once again...GO YOU!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
interesting concept~ repetition added strength to your emotions~ good work

keep writing!