|Reviews for Highs and Lows|
| drummerbonbon chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
Wow. This...this...this is good. Great job, never stop writing. This owns. Thanks for teh positive review.
| writerforever chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
Well written and interesting. Keep up the good work!
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
incredible brilliance. i went through picking out all my favourite bits; I warn you theres quite a lot!"In a world full of words
I can’t help that I find more comfort in my own
rather then in others."i love that, so throught provoking- for me anyway, because im prone to that feelings too. you spell it out more then i ever could, though. "after all
has something that we want." theres so many little gems of wisdom and deep meaning, in this- even though the tone is blunt, harsh and brittle- its really rich and intense. "And if I twined
like a rose
up your arm
would you still kiss me sweetly
like a child
I tore away
would you take me like a baby
the sinking feeling
that stiffens me
the stage curtains-" i love this because...the metaphor is just so incredible. it hits things so perfectly, that i could never even describe. its so morbid and chilling and cutting the truth up into little bits, i love it.
the bible quotes."- or so the bible quotes adds that sort of distain to this quote, that bitterness thats underlying throughout this poem.
"I’m just waiting
to tell you what I really do
so that finally you can hate me in peace."- my god what a wicked way to end such a wicked poem. hope i didnt bore you with this, but yeah, incredible stuff- really enjoyed reading it. the tone, the idea, the format and the little gems of horrible thought-provoking lines that nestle in underneath you, wonderful stuff.
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
The anger really showed in this poem, I like your style, per usual...nice work!
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
Wow that's deep! I love it
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
beautiful. as always. I can never think of anything to say. ;)
| ElodieAria chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
Awesome. You're so bold, its great! _ weely weely good!
| Cordelia Riordan chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
Wow, this is a very unique format. I like the way that you put things and such... I'll read some of your other stuff and possibly add you to my faves! :)
| serenity-x19 chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
Awesome poem! Really strong and has a good meaning. I can sense your anger towards this Gasoline Man and I understand why. *thumbs up*
| naughtgreen chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
You are so adept at expressing inner turmoil I really don't know what to say about it. I never really can find anything to say because it's all so lovely.
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
wow... i mean, wow. this poem just blew me away as far as poems ive read go. the way you've done a few words in each line have really brought out the words themselves, and i can feel the sadness here, the anger...
sorry, im just in shock... wow...