Reviews for Static
Kavita Najim chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
I'm not sure I hear the whine, But the poem gets weaker towards the end. Other wise, I think it's great.

Thanks so much for the review!

Peace, Jessi
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Cool. I like this. Thanks for the review!
Cati0vz chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Hi.. Nice poemand thanks for revieuwing mine..I'm gonna check the rest of them.. you have lots.. Sayonra..
Lavender L. C chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Its a little sad, but the flow is very good. And it's very deep and that's also very good. Keep up the great work.

LLCOh and thanks for your review
Semi-charmed life chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
Excellent. I like the last part, "thoughts lingering on and on." Very nice. Check out my new poem if u'd like :)