| Reviews for One More Thing That Went Wrong With My Life |
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   Bic Round Stic chapter 6 . 8/27/2007 Good so far. Please update. |
| bloom obssesed chapter 6 . 6/18/2006 Write more!i absolutely love ur story! i wanna know wat happens between her and tom! |
| bloom obssesed chapter 1 . 6/11/2006 OMG! i totally love this story! u so have to write more! |
| Ann Elizabeth chapter 6 . 4/13/2006 I'm going to really really try not to make this sound like a flame, because it isn't. I LOVE your plot...but if your story were a body...it would be skin and bones dancing in rollerskates...very thin, very weak, and very outlandish. Try to put somemore descriptions in your story. I'm not going anywhere with the spelling and grammar...it could be better, but I'd rather read a story that PUTS ME THERE than a story that's perfectly correct. Make it more realistic, that's the goal. This seems more like a telephone conversation...remember, writers are artists...paint me a picture. Keep up the good work. It's a labor of love. |
| 007blondie chapter 6 . 4/2/2006 woot! i love this very much, ! so UPDATE, PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ u better... o i cry :( |
| cpd3 chapter 6 . 3/19/2006 O! I love your story so far. Its really cute. And actionyish. i love making up words:) anyway, i also love lifehouses song 'you and me' it is really pretty and deep. |
| Michael J. Caboose chapter 2 . 2/12/2006 not bad, a few spelling errors, but believe me i'm worse. pce MJ |
| Michael J. Caboose chapter 1 . 1/12/2006 ok so where to begin. lets see... umm yeah its pretty good i like there is an undercover cop, person, guy. Tom. thats cool so ya know i'll keep reading. pce MJ |
| FireBad.TreePretty chapter 6 . 11/25/2005 i like this! update soon |
| the death of happness chapter 6 . 11/25/2005 THIS IS HOT STUFF GIRL! OMFG, I LOVE IT! the romance started *runs around screaming* YEAH! so... is this tom guy hot? i NEED 2 no more bout him, PLEASE tell me more bout him! OMFG YOUR STORY IS MY FAV STORY ON FICTION PRESS! ADICTION WARNING TO ALL PEOPLE WHO ARE GOING TO READ IT! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL COME TO YOUR HOUSE, AND FORCE YOU AT GUN POINT! |
| awaitinglove chapter 6 . 11/22/2005 love it! i really hope you update soon. I'm surprised youdon't have any more reviews! |
| LilLaTLuv chapter 1 . 11/3/2005 Hello again! You know me, and I'm e-mailing you and all. And I know you're busy, so I'm not gonna bug you about the story. I just want to try to add you to my favs list. So, here goes nothing. Talk to you later girl, and update this soon, please! Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| Logical and serene megadeath chapter 6 . 11/3/2005 Nu I like this story! |
| LilLaTLuv chapter 6 . 10/29/2005 Hey! Well, I'm sorry it's been put on hold. I hope you get it up soon, seeing as it's Saturday right now. UPDATE SOON! PLEASE? Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| LilLaTLuv chapter 5 . 10/21/2005 Hey! Of course I'll mention you. But I'm glad you fixed everything, and you seemed to be picking up a few reviewers! YEAH! You definitely deserve them. Your writing is phenomanal! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE? I really, really, REALLY love this chappie! Luv ya,Tashi :) |