Reviews for Complete Originality
Scarlet Alexander chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
I agree with the other reviewers that the last three lines are my favorite. This is a great poem. You are one of the few who understand the power of words. Keep writing.
angelicprotection chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
hey this poem is beautiful i love the last three lines "You are my burning flame,that will burn with me,Until I burnout."
roachpiece chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
omg that goes so much alond with my poems, Another Day, and Hazmat. also mt fiction A Lettrer to my Lost Love
one L please chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
That's so sexy...That girl of yours must be pretty lucky..Keep up the good work, I'm sure your girl appreciates it! )
of.these.words chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
I loved it!

Especially the last few lines

"that will burn with me,

until I burnout"

keep writing, and thanks for the review. it was greatly appreciated!
LeoOsaka chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
Wow, I like, I think this poem itself is original.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
that is so sexy.

~* noelle
JimmyCuntAcid chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
wow. you are a great writer! i really like your poems.