Reviews for The Dead Don't Cry
RainingAllTheTime chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Wow, I really really like this. You're a wonderful writer.
Greg M. Schumaker chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
Awesome imagery. I love that line "Because the dead don't cry." It's just dead on! Jealousy!
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
Wow, I really like this poem. I've got one coming up. I kinda like it.
Ecryptic chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
There was a time when I felt like this. Still somewhat do. But one must remain strong no matter what. I loved the chorus the most. It just seem to connect the whole song in my opinion. A excellent job.
Rozlin chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
another heartbreaking peice... i wish the world was not filled with such sadness...
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
This rocks! Great job!
undepressed-one44 chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
If you kill yourself, there would be one less really awesome poet with REAL talent on fictionpress..and then that would really suck.. :( But anyway - I love how you can actually imagine a person outside, looking at reality, knowing exactly how that person is feeling..

-freak from the corner
shiva the destroyess chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
You know my opinion...i'm pratcially in the same boat...good one..