Reviews for Of Tears And Broken Hearts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG i love this story i've been reading since like the second or third chapter but i just got around to actually reviewing because i just had to tell you that i love it i actually added you to my RSS feed on my desktop so that i know when u update wow that was geeky anyway my favorite pairing i have to say is actually the Sven/Diane pairing just because it's so interesting and intense but i feel bad for Julia b/c i also really want Julia and Sven to get together eh whatever i would be happy with either pairing...i also love how u have a flashback at the beginning of each chapter mostly b/c it's so close to my own writing style to tell the story thats going on presently while simultaneously telling the back story through flashbacks which personally is one of my favorite literary tools(also geeky) well i guess thats it i can't wait for the next chapter *Nico* |
![]() ![]() ![]() doing good! keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() *screams* update! an update! and finally some long lei-krissy interaction! they're my fave couple! when are they getting together? please! please! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're story makes my heart ache in a delicious bitter-sweet kind of way and I am literally loving every second of it. I really dunno what else to say...keep it up and update soon. myheartiswaypastbeating |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I stumbled across this somehow, I don't know. But I really like it, I hope you keep going with this, even though it's been a few months. Leila sounds gorgeous. I'd probably be head-over-heels for her if I ever met her. Sven and Diane are great. I love it. And I'm sure a pairing between Leila and Kristen is coming soon, but I won't know if you don't continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY FOR UPDATE! *dances around happily* i haven't been on fp in like a month then i checked back and saw the update and i was like O_O REALLY! so yah then i had to recap myself then read on and it was a great chapter and i totally can't wait for the next i hope it comes soon *Nico* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus! Awesomeness /o\ The love, the drama, the friendship, the nice amount of making out… I'm in love with this story! Hopefully the next chapter will be out soon I love your style, especially when Sven was singing for the first time. The passion I could read in there, nice job, really. And the flashbacks give a good insight about each character and their relationships. Another good thing. |
![]() ![]() update! *pout* it's been years (in my world) since you last updated dammit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this new chapter..much drama, but in a good "hey this is an update and lots of stuff happened" drama way. Which is good and I can't wait to read the next chapter...which is gunna be up soon right? |
![]() ![]() omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg do you have any idea how long i've been checking this story for updates? i love you for updating! *glomps* |
![]() ![]() ![]() *runs screaming in a circle* Danger danger will robinson danger. This Audrey moving into town is not god and now she is going to be going to their school... not god. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() (pulls out a gun machine) DIE AUDREY, DIE! sorry but i just hate characters like that... a good friend of mine went throught the same crap and her boyfriend... ex-boyfriend is still all 'pity-me' and we're all going 'fuck-u!' :P so forgive me for being so biased. in any case, this chap is awesome! can't wait for the next update :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn filters wont let me read chapter two at school _ will read the rest later but it's going great so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i command you to update! lol, just kidding. this is such a good story and i can't wait to see how what else you got lined up for these characters. make it quick! :P |