Reviews for Of Tears And Broken Hearts |
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![]() ![]() omg you updated! i was hoping lei really was asking krissy out though but still great chapter. update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Diane is way superficial, but i really like Kristen. (i always discuss characters when i review). Lei seems very very cynical. But Kristen is awesome. So is she out? i'm not sure. I totally understand the last chapter now. I knew you were competent XP. so, does Kristen remeber Lei? weren't they friends? thaat's the sense i got. anyway, totally excited for next chapter! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, so far you have succeeded in making me very very confused. but i'm sure you'll explain it all later, so i'll keep reading. you seem like a oompetent writer. that's good. I like the idea and the story so far. _ |
![]() ![]() more cheers! :D |
![]() ![]() omg! you updated! i'm so happy! *gets teary eyed* these are happy tears...happy! update soon! |
![]() ![]() wow. just got into your story, and loved it. :) cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome I love it. Sven is an awesome character she is so real and thats always a good thing in a character. I am glad that Lei and kristen finally realized who each other was. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() Hey I really liked your story so far, I like that you give the girls history. Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha i commented to this story in the malex board! D just want u to know ~ i'm behind ya on this fic! i absolutely adore it! *sigh* |
![]() ![]() omg! i love this story! you HAVE to update soon, i wanna know what happens between Lei and Krissy *gets down and begs* please? |
![]() ![]() heyz! i saw this story posted up in Malex forum and since u had a link from there... hehe i think u know what happened D anywayz, OMFG! i LOVE this story - keep updating and wow...u'r writing is really good! can't wait to read what happens between Lei and Kristen! *bounces in excitement* |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story so far! I really like it! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh. *smiles in glee* I hope you update this and FAST because I need to know what happens next! Sven kind of reminds me of...me...such a cool name, too. And also, I don't know if it's proper manners or whatever, but I'd be happy to be your beta. If you want me to, that is. Uh, yeah. Update. |
![]() ![]() Thanks for the response :)Well, i was folled anyway! I reallye noyed it- i thought the nanny josie bit was a nice twist of the plot- it would have been really unrealistic if lei and Kirsten had suddenly just looked at each other and realised. Yay for the update, and i'm already looking forward to the next installment! i love this story! |
![]() ![]() Yeah... i like girl on girl is great- its such a cute idea, i can't wait for you to i just ask ( i dunno- do you do/ will you do reader responses-pleasepleaseplease im so confused)- I'm from England- is there really such segregation between the social groups in america- and do you actually have cheerleader stereotypes? At my school at least everyone pretty much mixes in cliques according to friendship groups-not so much clothes or , I just love this- i think you've got the characterisation down really well- Lei is quite a complex character- you're doing that SO well and that Sven girl seems really the comment on you being a review whore... sorry- i waited until i'd read all the chapters that were up before i reviewed. Fantastic- update soon, i'll be checking :) |