Reviews for My Tattered Wings
Plinky chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
Wow, great poem!

"Gray tinted rainbows" lovely image.

"I'm dying to live" lovely phrase.

I use the word lovely too much.

Great poem, keep writing!
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
What's Juxtapose mean? I love your poems and you know that. They're really deep
Written chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
that's heartbreaking. but well done.
Ecryptic chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Another great song. Excellent lyrics and the flow is not off one bit. It can be relatable. In the end, all has been accounted for and you have a well-rounded song.
undepressed-one44 chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Aw, someone needs a hug..*hugs* :D lol but anyway..really nice poem, though depressing :( (not in a bad way though)

-freak from the corner
Rozlin chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking in the same moment
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
This rocks, great job!