|Reviews for My Tattered Wings|
| Plinky chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
Wow, great poem!
"Gray tinted rainbows" lovely image.
"I'm dying to live" lovely phrase.
I use the word lovely too much.
Great poem, keep writing!
| WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
What's Juxtapose mean? I love your poems and you know that. They're really deep
| Written chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
that's heartbreaking. but well done.
| Ecryptic chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Another great song. Excellent lyrics and the flow is not off one bit. It can be relatable. In the end, all has been accounted for and you have a well-rounded song.
| undepressed-one44 chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Aw, someone needs a hug..*hugs* :D lol but anyway..really nice poem, though depressing :( (not in a bad way though)
-freak from the corner
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking in the same moment
| HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
This rocks, great job!