Reviews for The Darkhearts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wierd. So wierd. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm.. this is very jerky and has no rhythm. The message is pretty clear, but that's about all. You spelled 'raping' wrongly. Try to get into the feel of it: read it aloud and you'll see how it doesn't flow, and then rewrite it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() creepy~~ reflects on the many, um, defective people out there~ kinda sad in a way too... but hey, life and all its cruelness~ good work keep writing! |