Reviews for The Darkhearts
1138 chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Wierd. So wierd.
Forsakn chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Hm.. this is very jerky and has no rhythm. The message is pretty clear, but that's about all. You spelled 'raping' wrongly. Try to get into the feel of it: read it aloud and you'll see how it doesn't flow, and then rewrite it.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
creepy~~ reflects on the many, um, defective people out there~ kinda sad in a way too... but hey, life and all its cruelness~ good work

keep writing!