|Reviews for Misshapen scrawls with curly tails|
| Plinky chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
Interesting piece - made me think. Nice imagery. Keep writing!
| diesoz chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
very metaphorical, very...very...something, something good, but I don't know the word for it.
| La Gitane chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Very nicely done... I love the loose freedom in this - as if there are random letters and punctuation marks flying around in a moment. Actually 'punctuation shrugged off' is a lovely line.
You seemed to abandon the writing theme half way through the poem, however, which gave it a slightly disjoined feel.
But still, a great poem with good imagery.
| renru-no-ren chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
0.0 okay then.
| Roman Emperor chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
maybe its becuase im a guy and have a tendency to think of the perverse, but this i see is a very sensual and becomes a very sexual poem. THis is really awesome. Kudos.
| deletemyaccount2012 chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
Beautifully written. I especially enjoyed the opening lines.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
awesome.. very powerful.. I love that last line
| rira-chan chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
great poem! loved it! thanks for your reveiw btw and yes i did mean worthless in my poem...i can't spell so...that's my excuse...keep up the great work kay! -
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
I love this. Beautifully written. Amazing imagery and passion. Great peice, keep up the great work!
| Fleabitten McNasty chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
I don't really get it but I like the part about peeling off his skin. Probably just too deep for my shallow mind. ;)