Reviews for Unbreak My Porcelain Heart
redandwhitetigers chapter 14 . 9/30/2011
That is such a sweet story. i luv it. It is the perfect sad love story.

Read it. Luv it. Review it. :D
Vanilla Sonne chapter 14 . 9/2/2011
Hello there! I just discovered and read your story and I need to say a few things. First, you are a seriously amazing writer. Yes, the story was not filled with extravagant words and detailed descriptions, but it did not make it bad at all. I love, love, love how with just a few words I can still capture the darkness of the story. The vagueness of each paragraph was perfect.

Secondly, I love Fear. His femininity is adorable and the fact that he seemed so simple yet there is something really dark about him is really beautiful.

Thirdly, I adore the fluff. :D I am a touchy-feely kind of person too and I find Fay just so darn cute.

Well that is all, I guess.

A big fan,

VanillaSonne
Insanity Incarnate chapter 14 . 6/17/2010
Oh Gawd...I cried while reading this. It was just so poetic and beautiful how chu described everything...I luffed how chu made Fay (cause he ish now) and Lily's personality. It was absolutely beautiful.
kfjhbvasiuhvauvba chapter 14 . 11/16/2009
This story was short, but it's cute and sweet.

nichloe
Ponder000 chapter 14 . 6/5/2009
Neat ending! Serves the story well and he so subtly became Fay again )
Ponder000 chapter 11 . 6/5/2009
Oh scary, i am a twin, my twin has thought of killing herself a few times and was even close to it before she chickened out. No wonder why his brother's loss is still affecting him so intensely, i cannot imagine losing my twin, well of course i can but it isnt pretty and probably will be much much worse in real life time than what i see in my mind!
Ponder000 chapter 6 . 6/5/2009
He sighed. “You do know this is going to change everything?”

Abit strange, like he's out of character or sthing...
Ponder000 chapter 5 . 6/5/2009
Abit too poetic to be realistic at times. Like what they say.

I thought shooting stars werent stars at all, they're actually just meteors.
Ponder000 chapter 4 . 6/5/2009
Fear is a bit wierd, it dint give that impression in the first chap. Painting his lashes darker? Hms...

you were the most frustrating human being on the planet.”

is this a typo?

Chaps should be abit more meaningful i think
Ponder000 chapter 3 . 6/5/2009
Hhaha, some of the things they say in here is very corny but its quite funny to read
Ponder000 chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
'Fear stiffen.' Think its meant to be Fear stiffened. Anywho, another simple one. I liked the first chapter better but this one also has its highlights like, its quite calm and easy to read
Ponder000 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Cool start, not quite quirky, abit different i guess. Its cool i like it. Simple but not stupid if u know what i mean, not really good at reviewing,..
christinaxxyo chapter 14 . 4/23/2009
I think your writing style is really unique. It's so poetic and it makes everything seem so much more significant. Amazing job :)
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
This was an interesting chapter... Lily seems like an interesting character.
Xanthe P chapter 14 . 3/16/2009
I played Kelly Clarkson's song Cry while reading this and I wound up crying (like I always do when I listen to it), but gosh. Fear/Fay is the cutest character I've ever read.

Your story was so simple, but it had SO MUCH meaning. It's amazing. Period.
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