Reviews for The Last Time
Jessica chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Very touching and nicely written.
Getuie chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
There's an innocence to this as you focus on the perspective of the child... it dampens the emotions that could've raged from this piece... which is most likely a good thing since it's quite heartwrenching already.

Well written... The picture is clear and easy to be caught up in.
Jitterrue chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
wow, this so sad. Very good description. only a few grammatical errors