Reviews for Maybe No, Maybe Yes
Letters to No One chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
I really wasn't sure if I liked this but the last four lines made my decision. Nice work.
monchilla chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
it was really really reallty really good it really spoke to me i would love to hear more from you.
Neverthought chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
never make promises you can't keep, right?

All in all, I like this poem, the last line is very powerful, and It's made more so by the fact that you enforced it with the title. The rhymes do seem a little uneven, like the poem gets lost a little bit in the middle. All in all though, I like the effect: Choppy, like the disconnected thoughts of someone on the edge.
conart chapter 1 . 2/5/2001
Please tell me this isn't your point of view. Really sad, but it's so true. - CM