Reviews for Wasted
Anarkali chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
It rhymes! And there's rythm too! That's very hard to put in a poem, and still convey what you really want to say. I think it's a great poem!
The System Mother chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Hmm... a strong piece.
gabriel ricard chapter 1 . 2/23/2001
wow...one of the better pieces of poetry I've read. told it's story really well without going overboard and making it corny. One of the best things I've read in months. 10/10