Reviews for eden is burning
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
wow... amazing. just everything about that was so beautifully crafted.

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot.
relapse into change chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
this is so fucking amazing

iloveit iLOVEit

dystopia chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Holly Rose E chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
the imagery in this is..well.. toxic, lol. "by driving fingers warm / and sticky into her" aha. im a sucker for subtle porn. and i love that you hint that Eden was doomed from the start, that everything goes to hell and even the picturesque perfection of bible-ism is really unholy and tainted. "eden is (finally) burning". like there's this rush of relief that it's coming undone.

but, truly.

this is wonderful.

simple, and ohsoloud.
createanarchy chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
your poems are amazing, they are slash but in a disturbingly real and possible way rather then just in a silly fan girl way

Ironic Presence chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
This was hard to understand.

Sin works like that. Except Eden isn't burning-we are.
Itamidome chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Simply breathtaking. My jaw literally dropped.
caralita chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
so far this is the best piece i've read of yours, it flows so well and its so intelligent.
this is britt chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
so how did it take me so long to read this? ha, I love it. it's grand. especially "and sticky into her and mumbling a mantra of sorts." this is really lovely, from the first line, even from the title I knew it was going to be. so, anyway, great work, once again. and, by the way, you have to be one of the nicest people here. (ha, I read over a few of your older reviews- made me smile.)
riotmaker chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
gourgeously funny and poignant.

Kavita Najim chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
This is so beautiful, i espaicaly(sp?) love the lines about Eden burning.

Peace, Jessi
Just-try'en-to-speak chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
once again i feel a bit ill seeing that in all those 60 reviews you only one person who agreed that that was sick. Adam and Eve were very much in love and there were no other people yet so no STEVE! Second just the way it was writen everytime i read you work i feel like i'm reading a rape scene not to be rude but its true that is your style...pure pain. It makes me want to just sit down and pray to god for you. I bet that makes you very offended but i dont do it to hurt people but just because i hate seeing so much pain.
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
jesus that is unforgivingly beautiful and cathartically, wonderously empathic. apart from the adamsteve thing. i'm sorry. it just... it's too repulsive an expression to be used in poetry of this god-ity... gorgeous. wonderful. the last line... perfection.
Bari Wilson chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
This is more gorgeous than any words that I could say to describe it.

Slash is my air. And you are my god.
flights.of.fantasy chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
the false paradise is finally way of writing and formatting is refreshing.

great work,

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