Reviews for Empathetic Love
Microfiche chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Beautiful imagery.. "empathetic" meaning love from pathos i take it? but why apologize for some else's faults, shame, mortality. you are strong and have an obvious love of your God. Your poem seems to me to tell us that you are afraid of being weak and unable to heal another. whether that other person is your lover, husband, wife, friend, parent, matters not. The over-reaching power of God shall cure all ills be they physical, emotional or of the psyche. Your poem tells me that you are not trusting The God to solve what appears to be your problem.
Korashio chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
THis is awEsOme! I really like it although it esh SaD :( and makes me think about how my bf and I are far apart.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
gorgeous. really, I can barely contain myself with this piece. though, small little note, the second stanza you should seperate the I from wish.

~* noelle