Reviews for fairytale
Ajna chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
I absolutely love this! The format, the wording, the way you expressed every detail... Just, wonderful! I get pretty sick and tired of fairy tales myself, but only the ones that have been butchered so mercilessly by our society. The original ones are actually pretty great [for my taste], they're morbid and whatnot. In anycase, wonderful poem, I just loved it!
Devidedistand chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Wow this is neat. Kinda scary. You took a cutesy thing and made it dark, which is what I do all the time. I, too, wrote a poem called Fairytale some time ago. Please read it. I also did a remix on it, called Fairytale Recycled. Please read it afterward. Here are the links.

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Silence the Storm chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Brilliant. Wow. I'm impressed with this poem. Beautiful, emotional and raw. Excellent work.