Reviews for Not Their Child
DukeOfJazz chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
Thats really nice. I also like the rythming in alternate verse it gives it a slight rythem.
Duck8 chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Just want to hug you right now! But another amazing poem. Go u :)
Sinnssyk Lad chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Very good. Short, sharp and cutting. So to speak.
WormsofCharacter chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
I especially like the last two stanzas; they have such a flow to them. The painful tone of the poem is very effective, and so vivid I feel like I'm there.
Bee-wytching chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Very painful. From the past or present?

Never mind. Moving, touching, offering a link for most people. Very well done.