Reviews for cosmic cataclysm reverse
Anecdotes Of The Arcane chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
speechless. just speechless.
fontanellemonster chapter 2 . 12/3/2005
i love the second part...its so delicious to read...and the meaning seems kind of oblique. which i like, because when people say things plainly in poems sometimes you just don't want to hear it. lovely
charmee chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
you have a way with putting together pretty words - it creates some interesting imagery.

I can imagine black&white photos as an accompaniment to this piece.
simpleplan13 chapter 2 . 10/9/2005
very cool.. love the ending & the second part
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
beautiful.. i love that ending

(ps if you could let me know whick od my poems is youre favorite i would appreciate it.. thanks a lot!)
AboveTheSalt chapter 2 . 10/5/2005
the perfect contrast to your ethereal projection. it sets my mind ablaze - i. is my favorite "& with these lips (studded with prophecies) i pronounce one-single-word: apocalypse." it so beautifully complements your first piece - a brilliant antithesis. lovely set, though i must say i favor the first just for the mystical imagery.

AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
subtle, sweet, shimmering, serene

it's love.
twenty-second seduction chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
oh, this is supremely .
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
Very nice.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Sinnssyk Lad chapter 1 . 10/4/2005

Sounds like something an emokid would write and then stick in a song.

I don't mean that in a derogatory way, it's just the way it seems to me.
lackluster chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
i is so breathtaking. and 2.

it seems more religious, this second part. still amazingly brilliant.
lackluster chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
it's like a collage. i love.
GypsyMothra chapter 2 . 10/4/2005
Once again, another fine specimen.
poetic abortion chapter 2 . 10/4/2005

I can't think of anything to say. really, I can not. words fail me.

love this.

~* noelle
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