|Reviews for Progress|
| J. N. Laerasyn chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Wow... that was great. At first it made me think of Brave New World, mostly because you mentioned science fiction and that was the vein I started thinking in, but then it started to sound like what happens so many times in our society today. It then started to sound very personal. This was so well done... I love how you used the "..."'s artisticly- it added to the effect. Very insightful.