Reviews for Forgotten
Liebe Dance chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
This is kinda morbid. :)

I really like the repetition of the title (Forgotten) throughout the poem. The rhyming works really well. It's placed nicely

I love the line "Those memories in your head aren't a dream from last night"
Sassy chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
One word can't describe how amazing this is. It's that good. Such good use of the theme, I really like it. Congrats and don't stop writing whatever you do!*Celeb*
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
WOW. Omg. This is AMAZING. I recently read a short story called "This is Death" about a man who hangs himself. THIS, however, was MUCH more emotional... Much more real. Omg. Wow. I'm shocked. I don't even know what to say. This is so amazing.
blackrosestears chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Yay. I am the first to review! I loved the first two or three verses. They felt really awesome. I thought there was a little too much of the repetiveness with the word "forgottne" but I didn't really ntoice it until I re-read it. Loved the part "she's flying, she's cying". Great job!