|Reviews for Quitting|
| Rubyme chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Congrats, and I hope you're done with the stuff. ;]
*shiver* "No one's home... who's gonna know?" That made me think of something I went through... COMPLETELY different situation, but that line caused me think of it again.
| Thorn's-girl chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
"But the stream/ of 15 year old sophistication/ it tastes so fucking good"
Perfect. That just captured EVERYTHING, and wow.
Congrats! I assume this means you are quitting? :D
| Kissless Goodbye chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
I really like this, oh and BTW congrats on giving up for so long! KEEP GOING!
I love the line "fifteen year old sophistication" and the whole section...
"Of fifteen year old sophisticationIt tastes so fucking goodLike her boyfriends mouthOn a Friday nightNo one’s home..."
The rhyme is good. I hate it when it SOUNDS like someone is deliberately rhyming for the sake of it, but this doesn't sound like that!
Love it! x