Reviews for Desperate Love
Abby Sequioa chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
so sad yet so wonderous, good poem~
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
sweet poem, very honest. good work
thin skin chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
M... I love it! The addition of the "I'll love you forever" after every phrase, whether it's positive and negative, makes a nice feel to .

Much Love,

Cy the Kat
not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
cute and a bit dirty, i like it, good job
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
I love the repition of that last line.. beautiful and well done
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
aw... the last stanza was so touching~~ if only love... can truly be eternal~ good work

keep writing!
Astrocide dont feel like signing in chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
In a sick way, this reminds me of myself. Nice job, btw. Simple, but simplicity is always good.
roachpiece chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
that was a little wierd, but who do you love, i like your rhyming too