Reviews for Puppet of God
Kassia Scarlett chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Oh! Now this is my kind of Poem! You are officially on my nice list! Never heard it better put. Everybody does everything now because Jesus told them to. I know exactly what you mean and agree totally! Keep up the isanely amazing work and your insanely brilliant brain!
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
the word 'die' is used too much for my taste, but I'll ignore that nitpick for a bit. and the line - "Suck out my forsaken soul" just doesn't sound right to me.

anyway, I really like the repitition 'puppet of god' as it just gave this a more powerful feel to it. I love how powerful ( yet stinted ) the ending is. just, overall, a very fine read.

~* noelle
demondragon666 chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
wow...that is freaking awesome! god i just love your poems...they are really good
Disturbed Insomniac chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
i like this one alot too!