|Reviews for Sickly Crimson Portrait|
| Charmed.imsure-Always chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
wowness sugar! just the words crimson portrait kik ass! you have talent sugar!
| ilovetheopera chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
As much as i detest and try to dissuade those people who keep on making attempts to take their own life, maybe just for the high, or for the drama, this poem is well-written with elements of half- and full- rhyme. i liked the flow between verses, and the rhythmic sound it produced when read, but definitely not the subject. just- please, dont be the next one to add to the death toll caused by over-dramatic and self-deprecating, loserlike people who don't want to help their own life and make it meaningful. (sorry if i was offensive, but i feel rather strongly about thsi subject.)
| Dying Rose chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
I really like this, it's very well written and I KNOW THE FEELING AND SITUATION. It can feel so much better at times to hack into ourselves, release that pain...desire...hate...love, whatever it may be. I think this piece flows very well and has a distinct, bloody-beautiful sound. Good job.
| Psycho Romanticist chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
No problem. You have great poems on here! Oh and thanks for reviewing mine.
I like this poem. Even though it seems to be long, and such - it still holds its tone and pace.
| Confused-Mind chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
This was really sad, but sweetly written at the same time. This is a very touchy subject for me, because I can relate. You captured all the feelings in this poem though and they came through stong. This is definately an excellent poem.
| sarah1491 chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Wow. That was truly amazing!
| Herminia chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
This is very well written. The poem captured my attention from the first word until the last. Keep it up!
| Shadowed Mind chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
wow, powerful stuff. beautifully expressed. keep writing and stay strong. all my love, shadowed mind
| Speaker For The Live chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Amazingly descriptive, beautiful piece. The lines "Hidden is her passage,She’s hidden from you and me." feel a bit awkward, because of the repeat of hidden and the length of the second of the two, but other than that, probably the best piece I've read on fictionpress.
| emilyrachel18 chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
omg Alex u have so outdone yourself in this poem. The metaphors are great it's amazing how you can write this with so much emotion and yet write from the 2nd person. I am so pproud of you this truely is fantastic. "her pain is her motivation" why can't any1 get that about cutters? it's amazing you just have to come see me now
| Infection chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
this was really good, best one i have read tonight. keep it up.
| in theory chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
Ooh so gothic, I find that about a lot of your poetry though. It's a good job I love the style XD hehe. Great job :P)
| Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
wow... I'm speechless, it makes me hurt to hear your pain...
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
Sweet, a simple writing style with the verses, yet it still captures such deep meaning and tragedy.
| Emmytastic gal chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
wow this poem is amazing... a little sad but REALLY good description. You are a very talented writer.
keep it on,