Reviews for Fucked up Inside
K's Moonshadow chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Wow. I love this one. Especially the last two lines, "Why am I not enough? Will I ever be enough?" Those are questions I have repeatedly asked myself. I understand where you're coming from. Keep on.

Much Love,

*K's Moonshadow*
Aldarona Finarfin chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
At first I was like, 'Time to leave a bad review!' But when I clicked the button I remembered the title, and thought, 'Huh! That -does- describe a fucked up mind.' So, here goes a con/crit review, woot! I like the end with all the questions. It made a paranoid, narcotic feeling, and I think it goes well with your poem. The line, "Just tell me!:" should either have just an exclamation point, or a colon. Not both, and mostly just because it's distracting. I would try to rework the two, "I'm breaking!" lines, just because that is also distracting. But other than that, a job well done!