Reviews for Sleep
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Hmm...this poem seems to be strongly related to death.

It was somewhat eerie after I read over it a second time. :)

Keep writing!
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
this kind of reminds me of 'stopping by woods on a snowy evening' by robert frost. it has the same repetive effect at the end that leaves it slightly haunting.
Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 10/13/2005


I hate sleep too. It's just such an interruption to life.
Amavi chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Wow! I really, really like this one. Your style is so awesome! _
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
wow... i liked how the first few lines had rhyming and then it sort of just drifts off~~ like sleep~~ very nicely written

keep writing!