|Reviews for Rude Awakening|
| His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
I love this one! I think every teenage writer can relate. Favs
| Amavi chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Everything you write has such a clear and true message, and I find that they all apply to me.
| sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
i think every writer experiences this. we have all these amazing ideas floating around our heads and we are all pumped up to write, but then it hits you that tomorrow is another school day.
oh the pains of high school.
| ronshaberry chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
This is great. I feel this way a lot... Not healthy, I know... But, okay. There's a lot of passion (to me) in this, or maybe you're just telling it to tell it, and I think the last line adds a dash of humour to it. It's good, to be sure.
Were you rhyming? I think.. you were... Or maybe it's just a really odd coincidence. The first two lines have some pretty awesome rhythm in them. Cheers!
Keep writing. But then again, I don't need to tell you that. _x
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
lol i feel the same school, big pain in the ass good poem