Reviews for The Velvet Petals
Haberdasher chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
wonderful imagery, great feeling from this, although im not too keen on the footnote down at the bottom there. still it is very descriptive.- the Lady Elaine
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Very pretty and symbolic.
gummibared chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
This poem was really nice and flowing.I think that it really paints a good mental picture. (:
Indigo-Andie chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
it's so soft to me- kinda like asking a question into the wind- just gets carried away...i like the personification of the seasons...beautiful work.
Strangerwithnoface chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
I liked your poem, although, I was a little thrown off with the prose. It was all... a HUGE run on sentance as well as... I dont think 'newness' is a word. Other than that, it was quite descriptive.
Crimson Sleipnir chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
Oh that was nice. Really nice. i like it.