|Reviews for strokes|
| jewel of the nile7 chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
This is beautyful!Very work!
| Protege chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
Stunning! Starting in media res just drops you in (well done), and then gives you three clean images on different scales - the whole sweep of the sea, the tiny person swimming, and an unseen "you". And you do something I always love - present a single image very well. You have definite talent - nicely done!
Thank you for your reviews. They cheered me right up after a crappy day.
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
a simply beautiful poem