|Reviews for Turn Away|
| ronshaberry chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Beautifully random. Or that might just be me. Most things I will read it one time through, but I read this a couple times over to fully grasp it.
I love the line: "Repeated- or would you call them lies?"
I like it muchly. Muchly, haha. I like saying that. Muchly.
| Drizit chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
That was sad. A bit different from your ususal poems but still ok all the same.
| chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
Oh, my... so sad. Yet from the start, I should've seen it. Do you mind if I analyze this a little?
To me, I imagine this little scene in a restaurant, by candlelight. Romantic, yes, but somehow there seems to be an air of... of closure. And not in the good sense. There is anticipation between the two of you, (I whisper...) and hesitation too. (99th time tonight)
The italic line at the end, does that mean that you were shocked that she turned away? Yet didn't you expect it? *sighs* Maybe that's how things are. You KNOW it's going to happen but it still takes you by surprise, like the moment of death. Nobody ever really thinks, yes, it's my time.
(I just noticed that this review is far longer than the poem.) I like this. It's... deep.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
beautiful. just so gorgeous!
| Autumnymph chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
Ouch. That hurts.
99 times in one night? That's a lot, she must be a master at evading or sumthin.