|Reviews for Black Circles|
| Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
the situation is well described... giving the reader some sort of idea of what is going on, and the emotions being felt by the characters within the poem.
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
oh this is terrific and terrifying. one i can relate to , and this is so delicately heart breaking and moving. the amount of love and care in this is overwelming. a really fragile and sweet tale.
| RandomEuphoria chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
Holy shit. I love the repitition. In a way it feels like the person in the poem is going from being quietly concerned and hopeless to being really quite angry and vengeful. I like the transition.
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
the feelings are so vivid in this piece you did a great job
| Forbidden Secrets chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Good god, I loved this. Truly passionate and... wow. I'm not sure what but this really hit me hard and I can't quite explain it. Good job.
| chicanerysmile chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Wow... this is seriously amazing. It's so powerful. Argh, crap, it's so fantastic and I seriously love it and I can't really tell you why. Sorry about that.
But I especially love the second stanza, and it just makes me ache with it's sadness and amazing-ness.
Going on my favourites. B.
And, omg, omg, thankyou thankyou for all your reviews. They made me giggle with self-involved happiness.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
I loved this. seriously, the whole thing is just so gorgeous and utterly heart wrenching. the repetativ line " what did he do to you? " - just stuns me and leaves my heart aching so bad. love it. I really really do.
| emmathree chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
Sckucking amazing. I love this. Oh Em Gee, amazing...