Reviews for Mohawk
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
This poem is sad yet the feelings are beautiful. I like how in the list line it's like you're moking his Mohawk; I'll probably look at them in a new light now...

Gabriel Lyman chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
i love the emotion here, its so real, so vibrant! Excellent work, keep writing!
Dark Child chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
i love this.

dead raccoon?

amusing and tragic

not really in an ophelia way..the kind of tragedy that no one notices. ) well that's the impression i got and i love how you focused on it subtly.

great job
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
I like the whole mohawk thing.. great poem... I like it a lot... the ending is great
ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
I've been here before. Well done on this piece!
Moonjava chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
Really nice. Never read a poem about mohawk before.
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
Mohawks are awesome! I really liked this one also. Please read and review.